EXT. PALAU FLEET LANDING - NIGHT
After a day of work ashore and a light dinner and drinks, DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL board the 2200 liberty boat with a dozen other sailors to return to Mother.
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EXT. PALAU FLEET LANDING - NIGHT, LATER
Senior Chief announces a boat ops delay due to rough seas at Mother's anchorage. All but DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL disembark the liberty boat.
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As curfew approaches, more Sailors and Marines arrive at Fleet Landing and head to the bar. DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL stay in the liberty boat.
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Senior Chief announces indefinite hold on boat ops. Some Sailors and Marines head back into town. DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL remain on liberty boat.
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Still no boat ops. DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL stretch out on liberty boat benches to catch some sleep.
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Sudden rainstorm abruptly awakens DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL on board liberty boat. They get very wet. DOC goes to head.
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EXT. PALAU FLEET LANDING - NIGHT, LATERRain stops. DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL stretch out again. Sleep.
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Rain starts again. They get wetter. DOC goes to head.
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Rain has stopped. Senior Chief announces suspension of boat ops until 0600. Sailors and Marines are free to go back into town to get hotel rooms. Muster again at 0600. DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL remain in liberty boat. Stretch out to sleep.
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DOC, LOGGIE, and SEAL asleep on liberty boat benches. Awning above suddenly dumps a few gallons of water onto the deck. They get very wet. DOC goes to head.
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EXT. PALAU FLEET LANDING - DAWN
DOC and LOGGIE sit in liberty boat, heads in hands. SEAL nowhere to be seen. Other sailors board boat. Pilot starts engine.
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EXT. AT SEA - DAWN
Liberty boat races through ever increasing swells, bouncing like a skipping rock. Driving rain peppers riders like pellets of hail. Cresting each swell the boat goes momentarily airborne then smashes into the next swell causing torrents of sea water to crash over the sides, drenching the occupants. Suddenly Mother comes into view. She is only 300 yards ahead, rapidly getting closer when...Pilot suddenly turns boat around and heads back to Fleet Landing. Just not safe to continue.
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EXT. PALAU FLEET LANDING - JUST AFTER DAWN
Liberty boat returns and ties up to pier. Twenty dripping sailors disembark, DOC and LOGGIE with them.
DOC
It wasn't even single malt scotch.
DOC goes to head.
FADE OUT
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